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Re: New Guy (Gay, fiction)

Post by ticklemywickle » 30 Aug 2018, 02:15

AN: Hey guys! number one: I'm really sorry that this is so late! Lots has happened in my life and I had to get back on track, but I am back now!
Two: I already wrote out this entire chapter and it was great, but then my computer glitched and it deleted itself, so I'm now rewriting

March 18
Dan's POV

As soon as Ethan parked the car, he ran out to open Dan's door for him. They sprinted to shelter and Dan quickly turned up the heat to 80 degrees. Dan turned around to find that Ethan had taken his shirt off. He blushed and looked away.

"Oh, I hope this is okay! My shirt was just soaked and- -" "NO, no, no,'s okay. That is actually a good idea." Dan said as he took his shirt off as well.

Dan was usually very self conscious because he is so scrawny, but with Ethan, Dan felt safe. Ethan, however, had a six pack and very defined muscles.

Ethan started to look around. "Do you live alone?" "Um, parents died in a drunk driving accident in Florida when I was ten, so I moved in with my really religious, strict, homophobic aunt in Montana. As soon as I turned seventeen, I started packing my stuff to move away."

"Oh, wow. I'm so sorry. I'm glad that you're here and you're safe. I'm also glad you got away from your homophobic aunt. Plus, it's always good to be independent!" Dan laughed, "You sure do always stick on the bright side don't you." "Well, if I don't my life would be full of darkness and never ending depression, so I try and stay positive for my own well-being."

Dan's stomach growled and they both laughed. "I guess my stomach doesn't like deep conversations too much." "You wanna eat?" "I have an idea!" Dan ran into his bedroom, grabbed a blanket and put it on the couch. "Sit right here and I'll be back with snacks."

As Ethan was sitting under the blanket on the couch, Dan started bringing out snacks to put on the table in front of the couch. There was cookie dough, oreos, potato chips, salsa with tortilla chips, popcorn, and four 2 liters of Dr. Pepper.

"Are we gonna eat all of that?"

"Yes, and we will eat all of it, while watching movies! What genre do you like? I have horror, action, comedy and adventure."

"Horror is my favorite. What horror movies do you have?"

"IT, Insidious, The Caller, The Autopsy of Jane Doe, and Paranormal Activity."

"The Caller sounds good...what's it about?"

"It's actually my favorite horror movie. It is a psychological thriller that is very hard to understand and explain. There are lots of time loops. I watched this movie four times before I briefly understood the basics of the plot. It always sticks in your head. It messes with your mind. You'll think about it for hours, even days. It's amazing."

"Sounds awesome! Put it in!"

Dan put the movie in the DVD player, pressed play, and sat down with Ethan under the blankets. Dan felt so close to Ethan, especially with their bare skin touching. Dan rested his head on Ethan's shoulder, and Ethan wrapped his arm around Dan, making Dan feel warm on the inside and out.

But it seems that it wouldn't last, because Dan's stomach growled again. They both laughed, "I forgot that I was hungry." Dan sat upright to start eating his chips and salsa. The chip to salsa ratio was about 5:1. Piles and piles of salsa on just one chip. Ethan laughed, "You sure do drench your chips in that salsa." Dan playfully punched Ethan in the shoulder. "Stop looking at me and pay attention to the movie!"

After a few minutes, and dozens of chips devoured, Dan started to get a little thirsty from all of that sodium. He picked up one of the two liters and chugged it down 1/4 of the way. He soon felt gas building up in his stomach, but he didn't want to distract Ethan from the movie, so he tried to keep it down. Unfortunately, the resisting only made it worse and the belch came out. Dan tried to keep it closed mouthed, but it was very deep and gurgly and lasted ten seconds. MMMMmuuUUuNNNnnffFPH

"Shit, I'm so sorry! I tried to hold it in but- -"

Dan was interrupted by a strong, passionate kiss from Ethan which lead to Dan falling back on the couch, with Ethan on top of him. Neither of them cared about the movie anymore. Dan was caught by surprise at the intensity and spontaneous nature of the kiss, but he quickly responded by running his fingers through Ethan's still wet hair. Suddenly, Ethan stopped and sat up, with Dan following. "I'm so sorry, Dan! I didn't give you any warning and I didn't know if you wanted it...I'm so sorry." Ethan said and held his head in his palms.

Dan rested his hand on Ethan's back. "Don't be sorry! I really liked it...though I was a little caught off guard with it being so abrupt." Dan giggled. "Ethan, you can kiss me any time." uUUURP

Dan giggled as a random four second after-burp escaped his lips. "Sorry...again." Ethan suddenly looked up at Dan and looked him in the eyes. "You're so cute."

This time, Dan decided to make the first move. He reached out and put his right hand on Ethan's cheek and his left tangled up in Ethan's hair. He gradually moved forward until their lips touched. Soon, there were no gaps between them. Dan made a move once again, by sliding his tongue into Ethan's mouth and passionately making out with him.

The moment wouldn't last yet again, because Dan's stomach growled again, this time not for food.

Dan stopped kissing Ethan, who gave him an inquisitive look. "Sorry for stopping, but I'm about to..." BBWWAAAaaAAHHAhRRRRaAA


They both started hysterically laughing. "I think I'm still hungry, that was a hunger burp." They laughed some more. "Then eat up!" "I don't wanna eat alone! Will you eat with me?" "Of course, sorry about that...I mean do you mind if I- -" "Not at all...babe."
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Re: New Guy (Gay, fiction)

Post by Aristhan » 30 Aug 2018, 06:05

I have missed this story, and this chapter was so adorable, but also hot! Keep up the good work.

And don’t worry, everyone has a life, just write when you have the time and feel like it. ^_^

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Re: New Guy (Gay, fiction)

Post by ticklemywickle » 31 Aug 2018, 01:32

March 18
Ethan's POV

Needless to say, Ethan was very aroused. Not only did they kiss, but Dan was also releasing monster belches. And now Ethan got the chance to hear him belch more while eating. This was quickly turning into the best day of Ethan's life, and he was very thankful to be underneath a blanket.

Ethan was also elated because Dan felt the same way he did. "Thanks for being okay with, now lets eat!" Ethan didn't have to say it twice, Dan was already head first into the oreos, eating three at a time. Ethan decided to just eat some popcorn and to mainly just watch Dan eat.

Only five minutes had passed before Dan finished the entire oreo pack, by himself. Ethan watched as Dan washed it down with a big chug of Dr. Pepper. This time, Dan stopped when the bottle was half empty. Ethan was getting more and more aroused by the second. Anticipating the inevitable.

"This one is gonna be a good one." Dan put his fist to his mouth, swallowing more air, seemingly to make his burp bigger. He then let out a wondrous, twelve second, gurgly, but bassy belch. bbBBBBBWWAAAaAaaaaAHHHoOooOoRRRrrrrnnmmmpppHHHHAA

As soon as the burp ended, Dan leaned into Ethan's face and blew the sweet air on his face. Ethan could smell the chocolate and sugary chemicals in his breath. To play it off, Ethan waved his hand in front of his face and laughed.

"What did ya do that for?"

Dan suddenly locked eyes with Ethan and stared deeply into his soul. "Because I know you like it."

Ethan blushed and looked down. "What do you mean?"

"I mean that I felt your boner on me when you were on top of me earlier. I connected the dots." Dan giggled, but Ethan was mortified.

"I'm really sorry about that...I couldn't control myself. I haven't told anyone about this though, it's a huge secret. So don't tell anyone."

Dan put his hand on Ethan's cheek. "I'm not going to, I promise. It actually makes a lot more sense now that I know. Usually people are either disgusted or tired of it by now. But you never were. And I'm actually really glad that you like burping, because it's the one thing I'm super good at and do all the time, so we're both lucky!"

They both laughed and Ethan gave Dan a hug. "Thanks for accepting me." "Of course! Now let's get back to eating! I'm still starving!"

Ethan kept watching as Dan started to devour the potato chips. In two minutes, he was halfway done with the bag. Dan took another swig of Dr. Pepper, drinking it until it was 3/4 empty. Ethan's eyes widened, he knew what was about to happen.

Dan started to rub his bloated belly, but only an airy, but deep, two second burp came out. uUUrp

"Well, that was anticlimactic." Said Ethan, who was patiently awaiting the big burst of air. "Sorry, babe. I think it's stuck. Could you help?" Dan turned his back to Ethan and Ethan swallowed hard. He was loving this. He started to gently rub Dan's back. "Could you pat the middle of my back? That's the most effective." And so, Ethan did what he was told, and it only took three pats for a monster to be unleashed.


Almost twenty seconds of pure bliss. Deep, gurgly, powerful, bliss. About two seconds in, Dan turned to face Ethan and moved so close that their lips were almost touching. Ethan could feel the vibrations all the way through his body and as soon as the belch faded, Ethan leaped on top of Dan, back in their earlier position, and slid his tongue in Dan's mouth. He could still taste what the burp had smelled like, and this made him even harder.

Dan suddenly stopped kissing Ethan, got close to his ear, and blew out a five second, deep belch. BBwwWAwaWaAA

Dan then moaned right into Ethan's ear, and Ethan started sucking on Dan's neck. Dan rolled himself over so that he was now on top of Ethan, and in control. Which Ethan found very arousing. He whispered in Ethan's ear, "Can I take this to the next level?" Ethan just whimpered and nodded, completely giving into his arousal.

Dan kissed down Ethan's neck, stopping to suck a bit at his collarbone. He started to go down to Ethan's stomach when he got right into Ethan's face to release another, powerful belch. BBWWWAAAAaAA

Dan then went back to where he left off, kissing down Ethan's stomach, until he reached the waistline of his jeans. While unbuttoning Ethan's jeans, and pulling them, along with his boxers, down, Dan said, "Sucking dick makes me burp a lot, I hope you don't mind." Dan winked.

Ethan was very hard. Seeing this new, dominant side to Dan, really turned him on. Usually Dan was just cute and awkward, but here, right now, Dan was smooth, cunning, sexy.

As soon as Dan saw Ethan's manhood, he looked at it like a meal. And Dan was really good at devouring his meals. All it took was one minute before Dan took a break to belch, right on Ethan's dick. BBWWAAaaAAA

This made Ethan moan with pleasure, feeling the vibration right on his tip, and hearing the beautiful sound. Dan went down again for another three minutes, not stopping until Ethan finished in Dan's mouth. After swallowing, Dan got back on top of Ethan and got right back in his face, blowing another, ten second, gurgly, belch into Ethan's face.


Dan backed away and gave Ethan an innocent looking face. "Pardon, I'm really sorry. Cum makes me burp." Dan winked again. After Ethan had the chance to finally catch his breath again, he was able to muster, "I'm pretty sure everything makes you burp, babe."
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Re: New Guy (Gay, fiction)

Post by Jerryfromfinance » 01 Sep 2018, 20:29

This is genius. I love it so much

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Re: New Guy (Gay, fiction)

Post by Solace » 01 Sep 2018, 23:10

Very cute! <3 I love what you've done so far!

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Re: New Guy (Gay, fiction)

Post by gokuanime » 20 Sep 2018, 23:28

I'm completely obsessed with this story !

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Re: New Guy (Gay, fiction)

Post by ticklemywickle » 21 Sep 2018, 22:47

AN: There is no burping in this chapter, just essential plot stuff, but there will be a lot in the next chapter, I promise!

March 18th
Ethan's POV

Ethan's dick was still throbbing when he heard his phone ding from the table. He was startled and jumped up, throwing his pants on.

"What's the rush?" Said Dan, looking a little disappointed. "I'm sorry, I'm just worried that it's my mom...I didn't tell her that I was leaving and she's probably mad." Ethan hurriedly picked up his phone and, sure enough it was his mom.

Get your ass home right now. I need to have a talk with you.

"Are you okay?"

"Um, yeah...I've just gotta go now. I had an amazing time and I'd love to do this again soon!" Ethan quickly threw his shirt on, pecked Dan on the cheek and rushed out of the door to head home.

It was still raining when he got outside. He flew down the roads, surprisingly avoiding the police, and ran inside, knowing he was going to get a whooping from his crack head mom.

As soon as he came in the door, he saw her. Her un-brushed, dark blonde hair was hanging straggly below her shoulders. Her dark, concaved, under eyes were paired with bloodshot baby blue irises that were staring through his soul. She was shaking.

"Where the fuck have you been?" She half-screamed in a hoarse voice.

"I went to Red Rock Canyon and lost track of time. Sorry I didn't tell you. Matt was passed out on the couch and you sleep until 3:00 so I didn't want to wake you."

"You could have texted me! I can't believe you would run off like that. You cannot leave without me knowing where you are. I thought you died."

"You're just going through paranoia from all the crack you smoke." Ethan mumbled.

"What did you just say to me? You're going to talk like that to your own mother? I raised you!"

"Not that well since dad left you. You became a crackhead, got fired from your job, and now you make Matt sell drugs so that we can keep this shitty trailer and barley have any food in the house. You raised me until I was ten. Now you let your 25 year old son follow in your footsteps."

"If you can't appreciate me, get the fuck out of my house. Pack your shit and find someone else to criticize. I never want to see your fucking face again."

Ethan's mom stormed back into her room and slammed the door. "Duuuude, I can't really tell if that happened, because I'm kinda hallucinating right now, but uh, good job on standing up to mom!"

"Shut up, Matt."

Ethan got to his room and found the biggest suitcase he had. Which was only large enough to hold seven outfits, a toothbrush, toothpaste, deodorant, earbuds and a charger. He had no idea where he was going to go, but he knew he had to go somewhere.

He got to his car and started it, and started to aimlessly drive in no real direction until he found somewhere to park.

He had nowhere to go. No one to turn to. All of his friends were douches and he didn't want to even temporarily live with any of them, his dad left seven years ago and he had no way to contact him, and all his family had either died, or disowned him and his mom.

He only had one person that he could rely on.

He called Dan.

Within 5 seconds, Dan answered.

"Hey, are you okay?"

"Do you think I could crash at your place for a few days? If not that's totally fine, I can find somewhere else, but I just really don't know what to do right wouldn't be long. Maybe a few months until I go off to college...I'm really sorry to put you on the spot like this, and you have no obligation to take care of me---"

"Hey, hey, hey! Of course you can. We can figure everything out, okay. I'm here for what happened?"

"My mom kicked me out."

"I'm so sorry. Come on over, I'm gonna make us some hot chocolate, I know you've gotta be soaking right now."

Ethan laughed, "Thank you so much Dan. I'm on my way now."

"Of course, Ethan. See you soon."
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Re: New Guy (Gay, fiction)

Post by bigburpboy » 04 Oct 2018, 02:30

I need more of this story!!!

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Re: New Guy (Gay, fiction)

Post by ticklemywickle » 19 Oct 2018, 02:25

March 18
Ethan's POV

knock knock knock

Ethan could hear Dan running for the door after the first knock.

"Come here." And with that, Ethan ran in the apartment and into Dan's arms. Ethan didn't want to cry. He didn't want to show weakness. But he couldn't help it. He sobbed quietly in Dan's arms.

Dan stroked Ethan's wet hair. "Go get cuddled under the blankets and I'll be right there with some hot chocolate." Ethan removed himself from Dan's arms, and held his face down. He didn't want Dan to see his puffy, red, face. Dan pecked Ethan on the forehead and Ethan slumped over to the couch and under the blankets.

Dan closed his door, and poured out some steaming hot chocolate for each of them. He set Ethan's beverage on the coffee table and sat next to him, arms around him. He wiped away Ethan's tears. "I'm so sorry. No matter what happens, I'm here for you. And you can stay as long as you need."

"I just- I don't want to be a burden." Dan shushed him. "You're never a burden. This small apartment is lonley anyways." Ethan's mouth tilted into a sad smile. "Thank you so much."

Ethan wrapped his arms around Dan and started to gently cry again. "Do you want a hot, relaxing bath? You've been through a lot today. And you've gotta be cold." Ethan nodded. Dan got up. "I'm going to run you a bath with some epsum salt, stay right here and drink up. Be careful though, it's really hot."

As Dan went to run the bath, Ethan tried to stop thinking about what just happened. About his past. There were so many times he had tried to forget, but it never worked. It was a part of him. It made him who he was. Hardworking, perserverant...depressed. He wished he could change it, but it was all so confusing. Everything became hell when he was far too young to experence that.

He took a sip of his hot chocolate.

Dan came back. "Are you ready? I'll show you where the bathroom is, come on." Ethan got up and took Dan's hand. Dan started to walk, but Ethan stood still. Dan looked back. "What's wrong?" Dan looked genuenly concerned. No one had ever been concerned for Ethan before. They looked deep into each other's eyes. Ethan leaned in to kiss Dan's cheek. "Thank you for taking care of me when no one else would. I didn't realize how tiring it was to constantly take care of myself all the time. I promise I will make this up to you."

"Don't worry about it. I like taking care of you. I always will."

Dan lead Ethan through his room and to the bathroom. Dan had made Ethan a steamy, candle lit bubble bath. He even left out a clean towel and a stool for Ethan's hot chocolate.

"Feel the water and tell me if it's too hot, okay?" Ethan put his hand in the steaming water. "It's perfect."

"Okay, I'll be in my room if you need anything---"

"Could you stay here...with me?"

"Of course, if that's what you want."

"If you don't mind...I just really don't want to be alone right now."

"I'd never leave you alone."

Dan turned around while Ethan got undressed, which made Ethan really happy that Dan respected him like that.

Ethan got in the tub. "You can turn around now." Ethan giggled. Dan smiled. "There's that cute giggly boy." Dan sat down next to the tub.

They both drank some more hot chocolate.

"Thank you so much, Dan. I can feel my body relaxing. This is just what I needed."

"Thank the epsom salt." They both laughed.

"I'm so glad I met you."

"I'm so glad you talked to me. If you hadn't, I would still just be admiring you from a distance."

"I couldn't help talking to such an attractive man."

Dan laughed. "Yeah, yeah, yeah. You're so much more attractive."

"That's a lie! You are adorable! You're so small and cute! I love your cute little cheeks and your beautiful eyes, your soft lips. I could go on and on."

"Well, don't stop." Dan laughed. "I'm just kidding, unless you want to keep going."

They both laughed.

"I love your smile, your soft skin, how your eyes gleam when you talk about the things you love."

"Well, nothing compares to your beautiful emerald green eyes, your silky, perfect hair, your toned body, and your amazing laugh."

"My laugh is sorta weird but whatever you say."

"No it's not! Your laugh is so cute!"

"Not as cute as yours...hey look, I'm Santa Clause!"

Dan looked over at Ethan to see that he had put bubbles all over his mouth and chin. They both laughed.

"It looks like someone jizzed all over your face!"

"I wouldn't let just anyone jizz all over my face." Ethan winked at Dan and they both laughed again.

"How are you going to drink the rest of your hot chocotate with all that around your mouth?" Dan asked, jokingly.

"I already did, see!" Ethan showed Dan his empty cup.

"You sure do drink fast!"

UUUUuuUuuRRp "I sure do!"

They both laughed. "That was weeeeaaaakkk! Listen to this!" mmMMMmWAAaaaaaaAHHhhhrrRR

"Woah, that was a long one." They laughed but only for a short time before Ethan's tip could be seen through the bubbles. Dan saw it.

"Oh god, I'm sorry! I don't know how I forgot! I didn't mean to do that to you right now when you're---"

Ethan giggled. "It's okay, Dan. I started it. I just wanted to lighten the mood, and then you did too, and...this happened."

They laughed.

"I'm glad we can lighten the mood."

For a moment they just stared into each other's eyes, admiring each other's presence.


When Dan let out a deep, closed mouth burp.

"Excuse me, sorry about was an after burp."

Ethan put his hand on Dan's face. "Don't worry about it. I never mind. No matter what mood we're in. If you have to let it out, just let it out. It may turn me on, but we don't have to do anything about it."

Dan kissed Ethan's hand. "Thanks. I just don't want you to get the wrong idea and think that I always just want to turn you on. Because I like you for much more than sexual stuff."

"I know you do. Don't worry about that. You burped a lot even before you knew about my...fetish...I guess you could say." They laughed. "My point is, we both like each other, genuenly, not just for our bodies. Burp any time you need to, and don't worry about me."

"Are you ready to get out of the bath?"

"Yeah, the water is starting to get cold."

Dan turned around and Ethan got out, dried off, and wrapped the towel around his waist. Ethan grabbed Dan's wrist and he turned around. They were so close. Nose to nose. Ethan put his hand on Dan's cheek and gave him a slow, passionate kiss, that only lasted five seconds, but Dan wished it would last forever. Ethan pulled away.

"What was that for."

"It was a thank you kiss."


"That was a you're welcome burp."

"Why do you do this to me?"

"I'll help you out, let's get in the bed. I sleep naked, if you don't mind."

"I most certainly do not."


And with that, Dan and Ethan headed to bed. It was the first night of many.
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Re: New Guy (Gay, fiction)

Post by gokuanime » 19 Oct 2018, 03:39

I genuinely LOVE this story!

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