Burp Fetish Fanfic: "Rena takes her fetish home"

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Burp Fetish Fanfic: "Rena takes her fetish home"

Postby alteredconfusion9 » 21 Jul 2010, 20:21

Rena shifted nervously, running her fingers through her hair as she watched Mion throw back her glass of soda. The truth was, she'd had her eyes on Mion for a long time; her ability to release deep, bassy burps being one of the main appeals.
"Hey, Rena, are you alright?" Mion asked, concerned about Rena's disterned silence, Rena simply nodded in reply.
"Keiichi, watch this!" Mion exclaimed as she grabbed his glass of soda and drank that.
"That was my drink, Mii-chan... I guess I'll go get another one, I'll be back in a few minutes"
"Oooh, that was a bad idea, my stomach feels all bloated now... Hey... Rena, I really think I need to burp, but I don't want to do it here... Please will you come with me and give me a hand?" Mion inquired
Rena stood up and walked into the bathroom with Mion. This was it, she could admit to everything here and now. Or, she could just help Mion without reacting. But that wouldn't be possible, Rena was already getting butterflies in her stomach. She leaned Mion against a wall, then put one of her hands under Mion's shirt and rubbed her stomach, slowly at first, but increasing the pace after a minute or so. Rena could hear Mion's stomach grumbling in content and knew that she was going to release a big burp imminantly. Sub-conciously, Rena pressed her lips against Mion's and gave her stomach one last rub before-
"URRRRRRRRRRRP!!" Mion released a burp that echoed down Rena's throat, which put Rena in a state of ecstasy, she felt light-headed and was speechless. Mion let out a sigh of relief, as Rena quickly pulled away from her, blushing furiously.
"Mii-chan... I'm sorry, that was a spur of the moment thing..." Rena murmured nervously, expecting Mion to be angry.
"That felt really nice!" She remarked "You really know how to help with gas! Make sure you're with me next time I need to burp like that!" Rena just stared in awe, as Mion hugged her delicately.
"I love you, Mion... Please be my girlfriend." Rena whispered shyly.

-AC9
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Re: Burp Fetish Fanfic

Postby sealfaec » 22 Jul 2010, 19:20

I must say AC9 that is one of the hottest fictions i have ever read
great job!
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Re: Burp Fetish Fanfic

Postby Skorpion » 22 Jul 2010, 19:48

I think a lot of us would kill for an experience like that!
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Re: Burp Fetish Fanfic

Postby alteredconfusion9 » 22 Jul 2010, 20:18

sealfaec wrote:I must say AC9 that is one of the hottest fictions i have ever read
great job!


Why thank you... *ahem* "sealfaec"
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Re: Burp Fetish Fanfic

Postby alteredconfusion9 » 22 Jul 2010, 20:19

Skorpion wrote:I think a lot of us would kill for an experience like that!


This is true, I am somewhat jelous!
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Re: Burp Fetish Fanfic

Postby Skorpion » 24 Jul 2010, 00:48

alteredconfusion9 wrote:
Skorpion wrote:I think a lot of us would kill for an experience like that!


This is true, I am somewhat jelous!


I've had a "burp kiss" but nothing like that! Maybe someday.
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Re: Burp Fetish Fanfic

Postby alteredconfusion9 » 25 Jul 2010, 19:31

Skorpion wrote:
alteredconfusion9 wrote:
Skorpion wrote:I think a lot of us would kill for an experience like that!


This is true, I am somewhat jelous!


I've had a "burp kiss" but nothing like that! Maybe someday.


I've given a 'burp kiss' before, but never recieved one. Wasn't quite as dramatic as the one described here though!
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Re: Burp Fetish Fanfic: "Rena takes her fetish home"

Postby BurpingLuke » 27 Jul 2010, 17:54

That was a great story there! I do love a good burpkiss fic! You should write another, maybe he asks you to do the burpkiss this time?
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Re: Burp Fetish Fanfic: "Rena takes her fetish home"

Postby alteredconfusion9 » 27 Jul 2010, 18:10

BurpingLuke wrote:That was a great story there! I do love a good burpkiss fic! You should write another, maybe he asks you to do the burpkiss this time?


Ahh, so you mean reversing the roles? Sounds like fun... I'll write a sequel, when I get the full inspiration... xD
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Re: Burp Fetish Fanfic: "Rena takes her fetish home"

Postby BurpingLuke » 27 Jul 2010, 18:29

Yeah, maybe you could make it so you bump into eachother at a party, he takes you round the back and asks you to do the burpkiss this time.
Something along that line?
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