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Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by corphy » 27 Sep 2017, 03:04

You've really made me fall in love with these characters! They are pretty adorable
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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by LikeNo1EverWas » 27 Sep 2017, 11:48

Thanks for all the comments everyone! It really means a lot knowing people are enjoying the new additions. After I finish up with some midterms I'll get back on the grind to writing because a single chapter normally takes me 3 hours to write.

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by relus » 14 Oct 2017, 04:52

Looking forward to it!

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by relus » 22 Nov 2017, 08:01

Really hope this isn't dead. This story is one of my favourites. Can't wait to find out what happened with the science project. @LikeNo1EverWas

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by relus » 19 Jan 2018, 06:04

Bump

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by LikeNo1EverWas » 03 Mar 2018, 14:23

Part 14

Jay did his best not to show it so as to maintain the three C's, but he was beaming with joy.

"Well okay then, that worked out pretty well. To make sure it doesn't get awkward how about we both acknowledge that it happened but talk about it tomorrow."

"I can live with that. So what should we do now?"

"Let's see...that pyramid still looks like it needs two more cans."

"You are most definitely right Jay," Kelley stated as she chuckled at the end.

As Kelly was about to grab a soda, "Actually, hold up I have an idea to make things more interesting! You're going to be blindfolded and have to guess the soda just from the burps."

"Huh, sounds interesting. Alright, let's do it! But first, you have to let me scan through all the soda you so I know what you're working with."

"Sure, that sounds fair."

While Jay was looking over the sodas Kelly went to look for something to blindfold Jay with.

They both finished their tasks around the same time.

"Alright, I found this Hello Kitty scarf is that fine."

"Fuck yes! That's my shit!"

"Why did I have a feeling you were going to say something like that."

"Hey, don't disrespect my girl Hello Kitty, we go way back!"

Jay found that his wit once again prevailed in making Kelly laugh.

Kelly then proceeded to tie the scarf around Jay's eyes.

"How's that, is it tight enough?"

"Yea, it's tight yo!"

"You're so weird," Kelly said as laughed.

"Alright, Jay you sit against the bed frame and I'll be opposite of you."

"Yes, Maam."

Kelly grabbed the first soda and started chugging.

Jay had heard stories of this but never really believed it to be true. With his loss of sight, his hearing improved ever so slightly. He was able to precisely hear every gulp she took of the soda. Each gulp was in perfect sync, one after the other with little to no stoppage.

"I've said this before and I'll say it again, but damn Kelly, you sure can chug."

Kelly soon finished chugging and gave a well-deserved sigh of relief.

"Ahhhhh! Sure I'm good but chugging carbonation still hurts like a bitch."

"Oh, getting cocky now huh."

"Oh, shut up. Just get ready."

"Hold up Kelly what do I get if I get them both right?"

"Hmm...let's see...I might regret this later but I'll give you one free 'make me do whatever' card."

"Oh, shit this just got really interesting."

"Ok, you ready now?"

"Yup!"

BUUURRRAAARRRPPP

"Hmm...nope, that won't do. I'm gonna need you to hit me again."

"Really? Fine."

Kelly leaned in closer this time.

oooooAAAAAAHHHHHHHH

Kelly had deep and overall even toned burp.

"Ok after some pondering I've come to a conclusion."

"You were 'pondering' now were you."

"Those oh so lovely burps of your smelled of Pineapple Fanta."

CORRECT

"Alright, that was an easy one. Time for round two. You won't get it this time."

Kelly took her soda and began chugging. This time, however, she was taking a bit longer.

"You alright there?"

"Yea I'm fine just starting to get full, you know with three sodas and all."

"Feel free to stop if you have to."

"What do you take me for Jay, I'm not some weak ass."

"Okay, okay my bad," Jay laughed.

All he could think was, "She's perfect!"

"Alright done. This time I'm just gonna let the burps flow. Just guess whenever."

"Sounds go-," Jay was cutoff by Kelly's burp.

BWAAARRRRRPP

"Sorry, I couldn't hold it back."

WOOORRRRAAAHHHHHH

UUUUURRRRRPPPP

"Hmm...this one's difficult."

"Don't worry, there's more whe-"

RRRAAAARRRrrrRRRRrRRrRRPPPPP

"Is it Sprite?"

NOOOPE

"I'll let you try again."

UURP OOH AARRP

"Damm it's stuck."

"Is it-"

OOOOOoooooOOOOORRRRRAAAWWWRRRPPPP

"There we go! That felt amazing! Last one."

Kelly leaned in really close

UURRRP

She then backed away.

"Alright, guess."

"Okay, final answer, what is Vanilla Coke?"

"Wrong."

"Damn it I was sure I was right this time."

Jay took off his blindfold and to his surprise saw both a Sprite can and a Vanilla Coke can.

"You tricked me! No fair."

"But you never said it wasn't allowed."

"Nah you still owe me that win, it's pretty amazing that I actually guessed both though."

"Fine, whatever, you're just lucky you've actually got some skill."

"Nice! But holy shit you actually drank two cans instead of one. That why you took longer. You're more into this than I thought." Jay laughed.

"I mean its nothing special, it was just another can. It's whatever you know."

"Whatever you say, Kelly."

"Jay I shall grant thee the honor of stacking the pyramid."

"Why it would be a pleasure milady."

They both burst out in laughter.

The pyramid now like this:
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"You stacked the stacked the extra can on top of the final one?"

"Well, I had to improvise seeing as you got a little extra excited."

"Shut it."

"Cute."

This time they both blushed, remembering that they were actually going out soon.

"So you gonna knock it over like you always do."

"Of course. But this time I'm gonna have you help."

"Alright what shall I do."

"Um...well...I kinda need you to..."

"Need me to what?"

"Ugh...just um come behind me and push on my stomach. I just have a burp stuck and need some help."

"Umm...okay."

Jay was of just as awkwardly nervous as Kelly.

"It's the only way alright, don't think too much about it."

"Sure, whatever you say."

Kelly lined up with the cans and came up behind her and kind of gave her an embrace but kept his hands around her stomach area, which was still bare as her shirt was still tied up.

"Just do it whenever."

"Okay, 3...2...1..."

Jay then gave a moderate squeeze to Kelly's stomach. As he did it he thought about how soft and warm it was but his train of thought was immediately interrupted.

BWAAAAAAaaaAAAAAARRRRRRRROOOORRRRRPPPPPP

The belch, yes belch not merely burp, lasted a solid 7 seconds and was one the most bassiest sounds Jay had ever heard. It had a low even tone that really reverberated around the room. To add to Jay's astonishment, the cans had actually fallen down.

At the same time, they both exclaimed, "Holy shit that was deep!"

"Kelly did you really just now do that."

"I think I did just do that."

"You mind dragging me to the bed I think I need to sit down."

Jay did as she asked

"Kelly how the hell did you do that burp err I mean belch."

"I have no clue, but it felt fucking fantastic."

"Call me crazy, but I think you have a talent for burping."

"Oh really now, I hadn't noticed."

"Hey, Kelly you wanna call it a night."

"Yea let's."

They both freshened up and went to their respective beds, Jay on the futon and Kelly on her bed.

"Kelly, I had a really fun time with you tonight."

"Me" TOOOOO

They both laughed.

"Alright good night Jay."

"Night Kelly."

Jay's attempt to sleep was soon interrupted.

URRRARRPPP

"Sorry! Won't happen again, promise!"

UUUuuuRRRRrrrrRRRPPP

"Starting now."

Kelly soon fell asleep, but even so, the burp didn't stop. She actually burped in her sleep.

Soon enough Jay was able to fall asleep thinking of how in the world he was so lucky to meet someone like Kelly.

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Well, it's officially back. Hope you guys like the way it's going and the character development. Of course, the over-arching plot of the science fair is there and I will get to it eventually. As always, if you guys have any comments or suggestions be sure to post them. Additionally, I've been noticing that I often make grammatical and spelling mistakes, if anyone reading could note them and pm me the errors it would be really helpful so that I can fix them quickly.

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by relus » 04 Mar 2018, 02:59

Great to see the much anticipated comeback. As always such a great chapter. I wouldn't be too worried about spelling or grammatical errors you can still work out the gist pretty easily.

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by RightWing » 05 Mar 2018, 00:53

Keeps getting better and better, love the story and the characters. Can't wait for the next part :x
"It matters not who you love, where you love, why you love, when you love or how you love, it matters only that you love" John Lennon

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by LikeNo1EverWas » 04 Jun 2018, 08:33

Part 15

It was about twelve pm and Jay was still sound asleep on the floor sprawled out on the futon. Kelly had woken up about two hours ago but thought it would be best to just let him sleep thinking he would wake soon enough. But at this point, she was getting impatient. She finally decided to try to wake him up.

"Jay wake up. It's like twelve already."

No response.

"Come on Jay the whole day's gonna be gone. Wake up!"

No response.

She goes up to him and shakes him a little while exclaiming, "Wake up sleepy head!!"

"Five more minutes please," Jay said in and daze. Immediately after falling back asleep.

Kelly decided she had to bring out the big guns. Kelly stood up straight and began sucking in air into her stomach. Her throat made the iconic raspy sound as the air rushed in to fill her perfectly flat stomach which remained flat after her actions. She stopped after about four seconds. She then leaned over Jay, her face a few inches from his.

BRRRRRAAARRRRPPPPPP

Her loud and even burp lasted for about three seconds and definitely got her point across.

"Holy mother of fuck!" Jay exclaimed, "I'm up! I'm up!"

Kelly got up and immediately burst into laughter.

"What time is it?"

"About twelve PM."

"Fuck you, I'm going back to sleep!"

"Jay, don't you dare," Kelly exclaimed as she had her hand on her stomach, "There's a whole lot more where that came from."
She let out a small but sharp burp to prove her point.

"Fucking shit, alright I get it. I'll get up. My wake up time on weekends is two pm I'll have you know."

"Jay, I think you need some help. Anyway, get yourself ready then we'll have some breakfast..er..brunch at this point, and then you can take me out like you promised."

"Oh right, that happened. Alright, rodger that."

"Yay! Ok, I'll go make us some breakfast. Mom left a while ago to run some errands so it'll just be us."

"Alright sounds good."

As Jay was getting ready he thought to himself, "What the hell did I do to deserve this! This girl is fucking fantastic!" After that, he began thinking about where they should go out to. Movies? Nah, too boring. Amusement Park? Gotta plan ahead for something like that so nope. Mall? That could work. They could get food, hang out, and maybe run into other fun things to do. Alright, mall it is he thought to himself.

Jay finally made his way down. The smell hit him first.

"My God that smells delicious!"

"Why thank you," Kelly said as she was smiling, "I made us pancakes."

"Good shit!"

"I only made a little though alright because we should eat out later today."

"Okay, that makes sense."

Both of them sat down at the table with their meals in front of them.

"Alright Jay, let's dig in!"

Jay took one bite and was amazed.

"Not only does it smell delicious but it tastes delicious too!"

"Heehee didn't think I'd be a great cook too huh."

"You never cease to amaze Kelly."

"I have to burp."

"What, already? You only took like two bites."

"Soooo?" Kelly said as she pouted and laughed.

"Firstly, gotta say it was kinda cute of you to exclaim that you had to burp."

"Well, I do have to."

"Second, how about no burping till after you finish your meal."

"What! Why? I thought you liked me and my burps."

Jay laughed, "I do, but I'm just kinda curious if you can."

"Hmm, a challenge huh? Okay, I'll take you up on it, but its gonna be a bitch."

Jay simply told her, "I believe in you!" and gave her a thumbs up.

"Fuck you!" Kelly exclaimed as she was laughing.

They continued eating for a while.

"Damn I feel another one."

"Just swallow a gulp of air everytime you feel a burp about to come up to push it down."

"I know, I know. At least I'm halfway done."

"Look at this way, you'll probably do a huge as burp at the end."

"Hmm, I guess I'll use that as motivation," Kelly said laughing.

About ten minutes had passed and Jay had finished his meal. All the while Kelly stating here and there that she felt another burp. This was honestly overload for Jay at this point, but he stayed strong.

"Three more bites...Two more bites... One more bite...Done!"

"Damn, good job Kelly! You actually did it."

"Yay me," she said half-heartedly, "At least I can finally burp now."

BWAARP...BRUUP...BRUU

"That's it!?" They both exclaimed.

"Weird I can't get out out a good burp."

"Hmm, that is weird. Maybe it'll come out on its own soon enough."

"Yea I hope, my tummy still kinda hurts."

"Wanna head out for our date though?"

"Sure, where are are we going?"

"I was thinking the mall. That sound alright to you?"

"Yea sure why not! Before that wanna try patting my back to help me burp?"

"It would be my honor." Thay both laughed.

Jay did as he as he was told.

"Oh shit, I think I feel it! It's gonna be a good one!" Kelly exclaimed excitedly.

BRRURP

"Fuck me!"

"Just give it some time. Alright, let's head out."

"Fine," Kelly replied kindly sadly due to her failed attempt.

They got in Jay's car. As Jay was backing the backing the car out the driveway.

"Jay stop the car!"

Jay faced Kelly and asked, "Did you forget someth-"

Kelly sitting in the passenger seat turned toward Jay.

BRRRUUUAAARRRRRAAAARRRRAAARRRRAAAAPPPP

"Oh man that felt good!" Kelly sighed, "Fuck wait!"

ARRRRRAAAWAAHHHAARRRRPPPAAAHHHHH

"Ok, now we can go...heehee."

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by relus » 04 Jun 2018, 08:47

OMG Yes! The return of the master! This story just keeps getting better and better! Great work on this part, can't wait to see what happens at the mall. Movie might have been interesting too, you are amazing!

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