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Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by corphy » 27 Sep 2017, 03:04

You've really made me fall in love with these characters! They are pretty adorable
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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by LikeNo1EverWas » 27 Sep 2017, 11:48

Thanks for all the comments everyone! It really means a lot knowing people are enjoying the new additions. After I finish up with some midterms I'll get back on the grind to writing because a single chapter normally takes me 3 hours to write.

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by relus » 14 Oct 2017, 04:52

Looking forward to it!

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by relus » 22 Nov 2017, 08:01

Really hope this isn't dead. This story is one of my favourites. Can't wait to find out what happened with the science project. @LikeNo1EverWas

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by relus » 19 Jan 2018, 06:04

Bump

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by LikeNo1EverWas » 03 Mar 2018, 14:23

Part 14

Jay did his best not to show it so as to maintain the three C's, but he was beaming with joy.

"Well okay then, that worked out pretty well. To make sure it doesn't get awkward how about we both acknowledge that it happened but talk about it tomorrow."

"I can live with that. So what should we do now?"

"Let's see...that pyramid still looks like it needs two more cans."

"You are most definitely right Jay," Kelley stated as she chuckled at the end.

As Kelly was about to grab a soda, "Actually, hold up I have an idea to make things more interesting! You're going to be blindfolded and have to guess the soda just from the burps."

"Huh, sounds interesting. Alright, let's do it! But first, you have to let me scan through all the soda you so I know what you're working with."

"Sure, that sounds fair."

While Jay was looking over the sodas Kelly went to look for something to blindfold Jay with.

They both finished their tasks around the same time.

"Alright, I found this Hello Kitty scarf is that fine."

"Fuck yes! That's my shit!"

"Why did I have a feeling you were going to say something like that."

"Hey, don't disrespect my girl Hello Kitty, we go way back!"

Jay found that his wit once again prevailed in making Kelly laugh.

Kelly then proceeded to tie the scarf around Jay's eyes.

"How's that, is it tight enough?"

"Yea, it's tight yo!"

"You're so weird," Kelly said as laughed.

"Alright, Jay you sit against the bed frame and I'll be opposite of you."

"Yes, Maam."

Kelly grabbed the first soda and started chugging.

Jay had heard stories of this but never really believed it to be true. With his loss of sight, his hearing improved ever so slightly. He was able to precisely hear every gulp she took of the soda. Each gulp was in perfect sync, one after the other with little to no stoppage.

"I've said this before and I'll say it again, but damn Kelly, you sure can chug."

Kelly soon finished chugging and gave a well-deserved sigh of relief.

"Ahhhhh! Sure I'm good but chugging carbonation still hurts like a bitch."

"Oh, getting cocky now huh."

"Oh, shut up. Just get ready."

"Hold up Kelly what do I get if I get them both right?"

"Hmm...let's see...I might regret this later but I'll give you one free 'make me do whatever' card."

"Oh, shit this just got really interesting."

"Ok, you ready now?"

"Yup!"

BUUURRRAAARRRPPP

"Hmm...nope, that won't do. I'm gonna need you to hit me again."

"Really? Fine."

Kelly leaned in closer this time.

oooooAAAAAAHHHHHHHH

Kelly had deep and overall even toned burp.

"Ok after some pondering I've come to a conclusion."

"You were 'pondering' now were you."

"Those oh so lovely burps of your smelled of Pineapple Fanta."

CORRECT

"Alright, that was an easy one. Time for round two. You won't get it this time."

Kelly took her soda and began chugging. This time, however, she was taking a bit longer.

"You alright there?"

"Yea I'm fine just starting to get full, you know with three sodas and all."

"Feel free to stop if you have to."

"What do you take me for Jay, I'm not some weak ass."

"Okay, okay my bad," Jay laughed.

All he could think was, "She's perfect!"

"Alright done. This time I'm just gonna let the burps flow. Just guess whenever."

"Sounds go-," Jay was cutoff by Kelly's burp.

BWAAARRRRRPP

"Sorry, I couldn't hold it back."

WOOORRRRAAAHHHHHH

UUUUURRRRRPPPP

"Hmm...this one's difficult."

"Don't worry, there's more whe-"

RRRAAAARRRrrrRRRRrRRrRRPPPPP

"Is it Sprite?"

NOOOPE

"I'll let you try again."

UURP OOH AARRP

"Damm it's stuck."

"Is it-"

OOOOOoooooOOOOORRRRRAAAWWWRRRPPPP

"There we go! That felt amazing! Last one."

Kelly leaned in really close

UURRRP

She then backed away.

"Alright, guess."

"Okay, final answer, what is Vanilla Coke?"

"Wrong."

"Damn it I was sure I was right this time."

Jay took off his blindfold and to his surprise saw both a Sprite can and a Vanilla Coke can.

"You tricked me! No fair."

"But you never said it wasn't allowed."

"Nah you still owe me that win, it's pretty amazing that I actually guessed both though."

"Fine, whatever, you're just lucky you've actually got some skill."

"Nice! But holy shit you actually drank two cans instead of one. That why you took longer. You're more into this than I thought." Jay laughed.

"I mean its nothing special, it was just another can. It's whatever you know."

"Whatever you say, Kelly."

"Jay I shall grant thee the honor of stacking the pyramid."

"Why it would be a pleasure milady."

They both burst out in laughter.

The pyramid now like this:
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"You stacked the stacked the extra can on top of the final one?"

"Well, I had to improvise seeing as you got a little extra excited."

"Shut it."

"Cute."

This time they both blushed, remembering that they were actually going out soon.

"So you gonna knock it over like you always do."

"Of course. But this time I'm gonna have you help."

"Alright what shall I do."

"Um...well...I kinda need you to..."

"Need me to what?"

"Ugh...just um come behind me and push on my stomach. I just have a burp stuck and need some help."

"Umm...okay."

Jay was of just as awkwardly nervous as Kelly.

"It's the only way alright, don't think too much about it."

"Sure, whatever you say."

Kelly lined up with the cans and came up behind her and kind of gave her an embrace but kept his hands around her stomach area, which was still bare as her shirt was still tied up.

"Just do it whenever."

"Okay, 3...2...1..."

Jay then gave a moderate squeeze to Kelly's stomach. As he did it he thought about how soft and warm it was but his train of thought was immediately interrupted.

BWAAAAAAaaaAAAAAARRRRRRRROOOORRRRRPPPPPP

The belch, yes belch not merely burp, lasted a solid 7 seconds and was one the most bassiest sounds Jay had ever heard. It had a low even tone that really reverberated around the room. To add to Jay's astonishment, the cans had actually fallen down.

At the same time, they both exclaimed, "Holy shit that was deep!"

"Kelly did you really just now do that."

"I think I did just do that."

"You mind dragging me to the bed I think I need to sit down."

Jay did as she asked

"Kelly how the hell did you do that burp err I mean belch."

"I have no clue, but it felt fucking fantastic."

"Call me crazy, but I think you have a talent for burping."

"Oh really now, I hadn't noticed."

"Hey, Kelly you wanna call it a night."

"Yea let's."

They both freshened up and went to their respective beds, Jay on the futon and Kelly on her bed.

"Kelly, I had a really fun time with you tonight."

"Me" TOOOOO

They both laughed.

"Alright good night Jay."

"Night Kelly."

Jay's attempt to sleep was soon interrupted.

URRRARRPPP

"Sorry! Won't happen again, promise!"

UUUuuuRRRRrrrrRRRPPP

"Starting now."

Kelly soon fell asleep, but even so, the burp didn't stop. She actually burped in her sleep.

Soon enough Jay was able to fall asleep thinking of how in the world he was so lucky to meet someone like Kelly.

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Well, it's officially back. Hope you guys like the way it's going and the character development. Of course, the over-arching plot of the science fair is there and I will get to it eventually. As always, if you guys have any comments or suggestions be sure to post them. Additionally, I've been noticing that I often make grammatical and spelling mistakes, if anyone reading could note them and pm me the errors it would be really helpful so that I can fix them quickly.

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by relus » 04 Mar 2018, 02:59

Great to see the much anticipated comeback. As always such a great chapter. I wouldn't be too worried about spelling or grammatical errors you can still work out the gist pretty easily.

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Re: Eureka! [Fiction, Female]

Post by RightWing » 05 Mar 2018, 00:53

Keeps getting better and better, love the story and the characters. Can't wait for the next part :x
"It matters not who you love, where you love, why you love, when you love or how you love, it matters only that you love" John Lennon

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