The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

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ShadowPuppet
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The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by ShadowPuppet » 24 Jul 2015, 14:48

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mephistofele
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Re: The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by mephistofele » 24 Jul 2015, 15:09

a good start :)

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Re: The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by coolkid101 » 24 Jul 2015, 17:39

OK, two words: FUCKING-AWESOME. Keep it going

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Re: The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by JWAPPEL » 25 Jul 2015, 04:17

Nice job.

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The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by ShadowPuppet » 25 Jul 2015, 13:27

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The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by ShadowPuppet » 02 Aug 2015, 13:49

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ShadowPuppet
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The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by ShadowPuppet » 06 Aug 2015, 12:45

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Re: The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by PickledHotDog » 06 Aug 2015, 21:55

I really like it so far! Personally, I was waiting for the story to deviate from the initial "burping interactive" story from the topic this story originated from. You do a nice job giving descriptions and meaning to the burps, such as the stuck bubble and reactions of the characters from the burps. Keep up the great work!

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Re: The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by coolkid101 » 07 Aug 2015, 02:21

I will be honest: I was not expecting that plot twist at the end. When will you write the next section?

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The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by ShadowPuppet » 08 Aug 2015, 13:58

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