Just a quick message. Your profile may say "male" right now. You can change that to female or make it unspecified. The software oddly puts it on male for default. Go to the upper right corner and click your name and then click User Control Panel. On that screen, click the profile tab and it should be the first option to change. You should see male, female, and none specified. Thanks!

The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Tell us your stories, either real life or fictional.
Post Reply
ShadowPuppet
Posts: 53
Joined: 11 Jun 2015, 23:00
Location: Canada
Gender: Male - Male

The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by ShadowPuppet » 24 Jul 2015, 14:48

.
Last edited by ShadowPuppet on 05 Mar 2018, 16:24, edited 3 times in total.

mephistofele
Posts: 137
Joined: 19 Aug 2012, 10:23
Gender: Male - Male

Re: The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by mephistofele » 24 Jul 2015, 15:09

a good start :)

coolkid101
Posts: 154
Joined: 19 Apr 2015, 03:45
Gender: Male - Male

Re: The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by coolkid101 » 24 Jul 2015, 17:39

OK, two words: FUCKING-AWESOME. Keep it going

JWAPPEL
Posts: 151
Joined: 27 Jul 2014, 06:20
Gender: Male - Male

Re: The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by JWAPPEL » 25 Jul 2015, 04:17

Nice job.

ShadowPuppet
Posts: 53
Joined: 11 Jun 2015, 23:00
Location: Canada
Gender: Male - Male

The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by ShadowPuppet » 25 Jul 2015, 13:27

.
Last edited by ShadowPuppet on 05 Mar 2018, 16:24, edited 3 times in total.

ShadowPuppet
Posts: 53
Joined: 11 Jun 2015, 23:00
Location: Canada
Gender: Male - Male

The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by ShadowPuppet » 02 Aug 2015, 13:49

.
Last edited by ShadowPuppet on 05 Mar 2018, 16:25, edited 3 times in total.

ShadowPuppet
Posts: 53
Joined: 11 Jun 2015, 23:00
Location: Canada
Gender: Male - Male

The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by ShadowPuppet » 06 Aug 2015, 12:45

.
Last edited by ShadowPuppet on 05 Mar 2018, 16:25, edited 2 times in total.

PickledHotDog
Posts: 112
Joined: 13 Nov 2014, 09:59
Gender: Male - Male

Re: The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by PickledHotDog » 06 Aug 2015, 21:55

I really like it so far! Personally, I was waiting for the story to deviate from the initial "burping interactive" story from the topic this story originated from. You do a nice job giving descriptions and meaning to the burps, such as the stuck bubble and reactions of the characters from the burps. Keep up the great work!

coolkid101
Posts: 154
Joined: 19 Apr 2015, 03:45
Gender: Male - Male

Re: The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by coolkid101 » 07 Aug 2015, 02:21

I will be honest: I was not expecting that plot twist at the end. When will you write the next section?

ShadowPuppet
Posts: 53
Joined: 11 Jun 2015, 23:00
Location: Canada
Gender: Male - Male

The Weekend [Female, Fiction]

Post by ShadowPuppet » 08 Aug 2015, 13:58

.
Last edited by ShadowPuppet on 05 Mar 2018, 16:25, edited 2 times in total.

Post Reply